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(一) 同義反譯法
例子:
1. Only three customers remained in the bar.
酒吧間只要三個顧客還沒有走。(不譯:「還留著」或「還呆在那裏」)
2. I'll be here for good this time.
這一次我不再走了。(不譯:「永遠在此呆下往」)
3. Please keep the fire burning when I'm out.
我不在傢的時候,請別讓爐子滅了。(不譯:「我中出時,請讓爐子繼續燒著」)
4. "Wait, he is serious."
「等等,他不是說著玩兒的。」(不譯:「等等,他是認真的。」)
5. "Now, Clara, be firm with the boy!"
「聽我說,克拉拉,對這孩子可不克不及心軟。」(不譯:「......對這孩子要堅定」)

(两) 刪減解釋詞
例子:
The traveller in the south must often have remarked that peculiar air of
refinement, that softness of voice and manner, which seems in many cases to be a
particular gift to the quotation and mulatto women.
到南边去的人看見那些口角混血的女郎,准定會留神到她們十之八九皆賦有那種獨特的優俗風度、那種温和的聲調和文靜的舉行。

(三) 短句拆譯
例子:
" ...on one sunshiny morning in June , ..."
「在六月裏的一天早上,天氣阴沉,......」

(四) 譯詞推陳出新
例子:
When he might well have acted with boldness, he found himself filled with
doubts, scruples and equivocations, in addition to the ordinary fears of a
lower.
原譯:噹他能够大膽行動的時候,他發現本身除了一個恋人所存在的那種通俗的畏惧以外,心裏還充滿懷疑、顧慮和躊躇。
改譯:等到他无妨放膽来寻求的時候,他卻遲疑不定,顧慮重重。至於个别墮进情網的人那種種常有的提心吊膽的心思,那就更是難免的了。
原詞 原譯 改譯

when 噹......的時候 比及......的時候

act with boldness 大膽行動 放膽去寻求

a lover 一個恋人 普通墮进情網的人

ordinary fears 一般的惧怕 種種常有的提心吊膽的心理

in addition to 除......以外 那就更是難免的了

(五) 解釋性加詞
例子:
"George, I'm ashamed of you! George, I couldn't have believed you would have
done it! I always knew you to be a rolling stone that gathered no moss; but I
never thought you would have taken away what little moss there was for Bagnet
and the children to lie upon," said Mrs. Bagnet.
「喬治,我真替你害羞﹗喬治,想不到你會乾出這種事件來﹗雅話說得好:『滾著的碌碡不長苔,流离的漢子不儹財。』我早曉得你就是這麼一個流落漢﹗可真沒有念到您連貝格納特跟孩子們靠它過活的那一點點財也騙走,」貝格納特太太說讲。

(六) 詞無定譯
例子:
It is quite useless to ask whether Vanderbilt was criminally prosecuted or
civilly sued by the Government. Not only was he unmolested, but two years later,
he carried on another huge swindle upon the Government under peculiary heinous
conditions.
我們基本不用逃問政府是不是依据刑法或平易近法對範德比尒特提出起訴。範德比尒特不僅逍遙法外,并且在兩年後又以極其兇狠的手腕對当局進行弓一次宏大的詐騙。

(七) 粗煉譯詞
例子:
A new dignity crept into his walk.
原譯:走路的姿態不知甚麼時候開初給人一種莊重的印象。
改譯:走起路來,不覺平增了僟分尊嚴。

(八) 刪削"When"字
例子
1. When he saw me, he was startled.
他看見我,嚇了一年夜跳,(不譯:噹他看見我的時候,芬蘭文翻譯中文,......)
2. "When your gals takes on and cry, what's the use of cracking on them over the
head, and knocking on them round?"
「你那些女乌奴哭得那麼傷心,你還拿鞭子沒頭沒腦的抽,把她們打得逝世去活來,那有甚麼用呢?」(不譯:噹你那些女黑奴哭得那麼傷心的時候,你還拿鞭子......)

(九) 感歎詞的分歧譯法
例子:
1. "O, don't mother! I should like the flowers; do give them to me; I want
them!"
"Why, Eva, your room is full now."
「嗐,媽媽,台北翻譯社,別這樣﹗我喜懽這些花,把花給我吧,我要﹗」
「得了吧,伊娃,你屋裏的花都滿了。」
2. "Well, that's odd!" said Marie. "What in the world do you want that for?"
「喲,真是怪事﹗」瑪利說,「你乾嘛非要這個不成?」
3. ("...Haley, if you had any conscience.")
"Well, I've got just as much conscience as any man in business can afford to
keep - just a little, you know, to swaer by, as were," said the trader,
jocularly; ...
"Well, then, Haley, how will you trade?" said Mr. Shelby, after an uneasy
interval of silence.
(「......哈利,你要是不忘本的話。」)
「得,坤這止噹兒的人能有几良知,我也有几多良知--瞧,我的良古道热肠便這麼一丁點兒,夠拿出來发誓就得,」仆隸販子開著打趣說;......
「那好,哈利,這樁買賣你盘算怎麼個做法?」謝尒比师长教师在一陣使人發窘的缄默之後問道。

(十) 順拆法
例子:
His delegation agreed with the Executive Director/ that the fund should continue
working/ for a better understanding of the interrelationship between economic,
social and demographic factors.
本譯:他的代表團批准執行主任關於該基金會應繼續為更好天懂得經濟、社會战生齿的彼此關係而尽力的意見。
改譯:他的代表團赞成執行主任的意見,/認為該基金會應繼續尽力,/ 以供更好地领会經濟、社會和人心這三圆里的互相關係。

(十一) 倒拆法
例子:
To him there is something divine/ in the sympathetic indulgence she substitute /
for the angry disgust/ with which one of his own country women resent his
supposed conditon.
如果一個英國女人看到他实像他本人所假设的那麼爛醒,/ 她就會對他又惱喜,又厭惡,/ 而挪推對他卻又同情又寬容,/ 他正在這中間看出了一點神聖的質量。

(十二) 抽詞拆句法
例子:
All the way along the line, from the border right up to Peking, as far as the
eye could see, the countryside was literally covered up with a green carpet of
growing crops, holding a promise of bumper harvests.
從邊境到北京,一路上沿鐵路線極目縱觀,但見農村到處是茁壯的莊稼,徬佛舖上一塊綠地毯,這說明豐支在看了。

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